2009
12.08

ColdPlums

I spotted this poem on the London Underground. It’s called “This Is Just To Say” by William Carlos Williams and took me back to my uni days in York. I love the ambiguous balance between apology, confession and teasing…

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

(Opinion: Jim Green – MD)

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  1. I spotted this poem on the back of a fag packet and took me back to my uni days in Scunthorpe. I love the ambiguous balance between anxiety, excess and inevitable blindness…

    I have drunk
    the absinthe
    that was in
    your fridge

    and which
    you were probably
    saving
    for breakfast

    Forgive me
    I’ve gone blind
    so sweaty
    and so cold

  2. Freud would have something to say about that plum poem

  3. Genius.

  4. I once had some plums
    So fine they did shine
    Like squished little dibbles in water and wine
    I quaffed a quick jango then spoofed a wry jot
    I dropped to my knees and spiffled a quick wit

  5. Errrrrr…. nice